high maria

Hi! I definitely like the story. But I also agree with other members, I reckon it's too short to be a story and it stems to some misunderstandings! My advice ...

“I want a kitten” she said commandingly. She was not tall, but high heels made her to be refined and strict. Black trousers, black and white blouse…Her official outlook doesn’t ...

Hi! I've said that like your style of writing! The porcelain doll seems to be a symbol! All in all it's great! Don't be shy to write more! It's a ...

Hello! You see, it's strange, but I do understand you! A lot of people can't understand creative one, can't get the idea from their works! But personally I like the ...

Hi, Cripple! Well, sorry I can't be objective towards your story, because I'm not keen on this kind of thing. You see it's like a conscription to someone. Truly said ...

Hi kite! I do like this story! At first it seems like a detective one, but till the end we begin to understand that we misunderstood you!))) But all in ...

Hello Twixt! For my part, you are really talented and don't lose your flair for description. Yes, your descriptions are really good, though I found it difficult to understand what ...

Hi! Well, including the fact that is the first part you should tell something about the character itself, not to start from the action. But firmly believe that this chapter ...

Hi Daisy! I don't know if I could help you with my opinion, but here it is. First of all, it depends on what are you going to write for. ...

Well, the storyline is not so bad. It is readable and gripping, but you can't forget that it is a story, romantic story. So you need to use more descriptions ...

Hi! A great science-fiction I suppose. Though I amn't keen on fantasy, I read it with pleasure. Feels like it's not your first writing experience and You certainly have a ...

Something light

Hi! I do really like your story! Good job! You definately have a flair for writing romantic fiction. The story is not lackluster or plain, quite on the contrary - ...

For my part, I really like that. You see xKelle_Bellex, your little story as well as your style of writing are very alike to mine. No desriptions, no pre-story - ...

I combined different colours! See what I got!